Follow-up email templates

Nine copy-paste emails for the three moments that decide whether an enquiry becomes an order: the first reply, chasing a buyer who has gone quiet, and sampling. Replace the [placeholders] before sending.

使用说明

  • `[ ]` 内为占位符,发送前替换;不要留着方括号。
  • 主题行决定打开率:短、具体、含品类或数量,不用 "Re: Re: Re:"。
  • 跟进节奏:首答 ≤1 个工作日 → +3~4 天 → +7~10 天 → 收尾一封(共 4 封,之后转季度回访)。
  • 欧洲客户避开周一上午和周五下午;德国/荷兰客户偏好直接、少寒暄。
  • 每封只问 1–3 个问题。问得越少,回得越快。
  • 涉及价格/交期/合规的表述,必须与报价单一致,不要口头承诺没做过测试的标准。

  • A. 首次回复(First reply)

    A1 · 标准首答(收到询盘,需要澄清规格)

    Subject: Your [patio umbrella] enquiry — 3 quick questions before I quote

    Dear [Name],
    
    Thank you for your enquiry about [product]. I have it, and I can quote it — I just need three things to make the number accurate rather than approximate:
    
    1. Canopy size and fabric: [e.g. Ø3.0 m, 240 g/m² polyester]
    2. Frame: aluminium or fibreglass ribs, and pole diameter
    3. Quantity and split: total pieces, and how it divides across colours/sizes
    
    Two things worth knowing up front:
    - Custom specification normally starts at 500 pcs per colour per size; stock canopy colours with straightforward printing can run lower.
    - Standard lead time is 25–35 days after sample approval, and we sample before any bulk commitment.
    
    If you have a drawing, artwork or a target sample, reply with it — that is faster than describing it.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet
    Shadopia — umbrella & outdoor shading sourcing
    Shangyu, Shaoxing, China | violet@shadopia.com

    A2 · 信息不足(询盘太泛,要关键字段)

    Subject: Re: umbrella enquiry — can you confirm these 4 fields?

    Dear [Name],
    
    Happy to quote. Right now I can only give you a range, and a range is not useful for planning — so could you confirm:
    
    - Product: [patio / golf / promotional / beach / tent]
    - Size & fabric: [size, gsm, coating]
    - Quantity: [total, and split by colour/size]
    - Destination port & target date: [port, month]
    
    With those four I can come back within 1–3 business days with factory options, MOQ, a sampling plan and an itemised quote.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    A3 · 报价已附上(Quote attached)

    Subject: Quotation: [product], [qty] pcs — [your company]

    Dear [Name],
    
    Please find the quotation attached: [product], [qty] pcs, FOB Ningbo.
    
    What is included:
    - Unit price,MOQ and packing: [summary]
    - Sampling: [cost, and that it is credited against the first bulk order]
    - Lead time: 25–35 days after sample approval (longer in peak season, roughly Dec–Mar)
    - Validity: 30 days, because fabric and component costs move
    
    What is not included unless you ask for it: [bases / gift boxes / third-party testing / DDP].
    
    If the price is close but not there, tell me your target and the volume that goes with it — I would rather adjust the specification than lose the programme.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    B. 未回复跟进(Follow-up when they go quiet)

    B1 · +3~4 天(轻量,加一个具体问题)

    Subject: Re: [product] — shall I hold a production slot for you?

    Dear [Name],
    
    Following up on the [product] enquiry. No pressure — I just do not want you to lose the slot.
    
    Two things that may help you decide:
    - [Quantity] pcs is workable at [MOQ/spec note]
    - Production in [month] is still open; from [month] it gets tight before the season
    
    If the specification changed, send me the new one and I will re-quote rather than chase.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    B2 · +7~10 天(给新信息,不给压力)

    Subject: One thing I forgot to mention — [sampling / packing / compliance]

    Dear [Name],
    
    One detail I did not put in my last email, and it is usually the one that matters at your end:
    
    [Pick one, keep it real:]
    - Sampling: samples are charged and normally credited against the first bulk order, so you can approve before committing.
    - Compliance: we arrange REACH SVHC screening and mechanical testing through a third-party lab, and send the report with the shipment documents.
    - Packing: carton dimensions are sent with the quotation, so your warehouse can plan container utilisation in advance.
    
    If this programme has moved to next season, say so and I will come back nearer the time rather than keep emailing.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    B3 · 收尾一封(Break-up,留门)

    Subject: Closing the loop on [product]

    Dear [Name],
    
    I will stop emailing about the [product] enquiry — I assume the timing or the specification has moved.
    
    If it comes back: reply to this email and I will pick it up with the original specification on file, no need to start over.
    
    Either way, good luck with the season.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    C. 打样确认(Sampling)

    C1 · 样品已寄出(Shipped)

    Subject: Your sample is on the way — [courier] [tracking no.]

    Dear [Name],
    
    Your sample has shipped.
    
    - Courier: [courier], tracking: [number]
    - Sent: [date] · Expected: [date range]
    - What is in the box: [product, colour, print position]
    
    When it arrives, please check three things specifically:
    1. Size and frame — does it match your specification?
    2. Fabric hand and coating — is the weight right for your market?
    3. Print — colour and position on the actual fabric, not on paper
    
    Reply with a photo if something is off. That is the fastest way for me to correct it before bulk.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    C2 · 催确认(Ask for approval)

    Subject: Sample approval — can you confirm by [date]?

    Dear [Name],
    
    Could you confirm the sample by [date]? Here is why the date matters:
    
    - Bulk lead time is 25–35 days from approval
    - Your target date is [date]
    - That leaves us [n] days of buffer, and production slots are booked in order of approval
    
    If it is a no, tell me what to change — a rejection with a reason is more useful to me than silence.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    C3 · 样品需要修改(Second round)

    Subject: Sample revision — [what changed]

    Dear [Name],
    
    Understood. We will adjust and re-sample:
    
    - Change 1: [e.g. rib material, steel → fibreglass]
    - Change 2: [e.g. print position, one panel → alternate panels]
    - Unchanged: [everything else]
    
    Cost and timing:
    - Revised sample: [cost / free], [n] days to build
    - Effect on bulk price: [none / +X% / to be re-quoted]
    - Effect on lead time: [none / +n days]
    
    I will send photos before shipping so you only wait for the courier once.
    
    Best regards,
    Violet

    附:三条纪律

    1. **不承诺没测过的标准。** 客户问 "does it pass EN/CPSIA",回答是 "we test to the standard you name and send the report" —— 不是 "yes it passes"。

    2. **价格有效期写进邮件。** 30 天,因为面料和配件价格会动。

    3. **每次跟进都要有一个新信息。** 折扣、交期、合规、包装——空催只会掉好感。

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